Comments : Just

  • 3 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The rhyme was fantastic in this, and the repetition of "just" to start every stanza further illustrated that sense of being emptied out, hollow. I felt the utter exhaustion, as being torn down time and time again can make us feel like we have nothing left to give. You pinned that hopelessness as well as being unable to get out of the darkness so well here.

    Keep sharing!