Comments : cacoethes for yearning you.

  • 4 months ago

    by Star

    Your usage of words is so interesting!!! The way you deliver the emotions is unique. The love in this is so powerful, it’s shifting from being perplexed to a zen mode. It’s like your trying to find the balance of loving that person (like they’re your type of meditation), but still being true to yourself.

    I maybe completely off, but I dont care this is one real good piece of poetry!!

  • 4 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    What an interesting way to describe a yoga pose turning it into a beautiful person with such elegance yet filled with beauty. I liked the words you have chosen to bring this alive! Well written!