Comments : Spider Rain

  • 3 weeks ago

    by hiraeth

    Nominated.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Star

      Oh wow thanks ^_^

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Skyfire

    Awesome write. I have one opinion - definitely feel free to ignore. In the last stanza, you use the phrase "your webs that you're" and it made me stumble a bit. Consider "the webs that you're" maybe, or something else that either changes one instance of you're/your or perhaps separates them more.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Star

      You’re so right!!! Thank you :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Lost star

    Just Beautiful.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Star

      Thank you!!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Very nice poem

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Star

      Thank you

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautifully detailed, Star. A truly delicate write.

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much!!!!