by prasanna
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Nominated. |
by Star
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Oh wow thanks ^_^ |
by Skyfire
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Awesome write. I have one opinion - definitely feel free to ignore. In the last stanza, you use the phrase "your webs that you're" and it made me stumble a bit. Consider "the webs that you're" maybe, or something else that either changes one instance of you're/your or perhaps separates them more. |
by Star
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You’re so right!!! Thank you :) |
by Lost star
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Just Beautiful. |
by Star
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Thank you!! |
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Very nice poem |
by Star
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Thank you |
by Ben Pickard
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Beautifully detailed, Star. A truly delicate write. |
by Star
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Thank you so much!!!! |