Comments : (W)hole

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a wonderfully skilled and beautifully worded poem this is. I have to say, the title is very imaginative, too.

    All the very best.

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    There was reassurance I read in this, with that tinge of sadness, and like you are waiting, to know and understand what being "whole" means. The connection to the moon and that kinship with it, wanting to know if it grieves in the same ways... brings some peace of mind. That we are not alone in our search for what is missing...

  • 2 years ago

    by yogi73

    You always put your best forward. Lovely and well done