Comments : The Woman in the Wall

  • 1 month ago

    by Lost star

    I love the narration in this poem! Wonderfully crafted!

    • 1 month ago

      by Star

      Thank you lost star :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Skyfire

    This reminded me of the story "The Yellow Wallpaper." Creative write.

    • 1 month ago

      by Star

      Thank you :)

  • 1 day ago

    by Everlasting

    I’m glad to know I’m not the only one who see images on the walls, floors, etc. Lol
    Upon growing up, There used to be a face of a man on the floor of the restroom. It used to creep me out whenever I had to... you know. I would place my shoe in that one spot. Oh, and there were more faces and shapes... but that one just creeped me out. I had other occasions where I had so much fun imagining and playing around with the shapes, faces I saw almost everywhere. Now a days, I’m just busy I don’t see them. Occasionally, I might but ignore them.

    • 22 hours ago

      by Star

      I don’t imagine things I see them for real :p you forgot to mention the most important thing the clouds, there’s always something in the clouds!

      Dont ignore them :( it’s almost like Wendy grew up stopped believing in fairies and Peter Pan :p

      Thank you for reading Luce ^_^

  • 21 hours ago

    by Everlasting

    Yeah, I’ll never forget the clouds. That’s always my gate away to something fun and relaxing. I see them specially when my husband is driving and I’m just enjoying the view.
    By the way, haha I guess we both have pareidolia.

    • 20 hours ago

      by Star

      Then you’re not ignoring them :p I love the clouds, they really are relaxing!!
      Maybe we do have pareidolia lol, I didnt know this had a term