Comments : Roots

  • 7 months ago

    by hiraeth

    I'm so glad this is nominated. I'm not sure how I didn't read this till now but wow.

    I've been absolutely floored since reading the opening lines

    "when failure befalls,
    why do you ache
    in heavy strokes of despair
    and don
    all the synonyms of pain?"

    like !!!

    I really hope to see this on the front page

    • 7 months ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Thank you so much Hiraeth for your feedback. Humbled.

  • 7 months ago

    by Skyfire

    "the sunshine
    and rain
    in you
    are capable
    of raising flowers."

    Stunning.

  • 7 months ago

    by Lost star

    just wonderful!

  • 4 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Like a tree, no matter how hard the storm blows, the tree will stand when it's roots are strong. When that tree understand it's strength, it'll stop worrying when the clouds darken.

    Take care.

    • 4 months ago

      by Gracy Judith

      Well said, Mr. Darcy "the tree will stand when it's roots are strong."
      Thank you for your feedback.
      Cheers.