Comments : Shadowed.

  • 1 month ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohhhh the feelings this stirs up in me... so powerful and just wow!

  • 1 month ago

    by Lost star

    Hi, this poem has so much emotional imagery it's wonderful!

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    It is so difficult living in half worlds. You are still feeling the pain of the here and now, wishing, but not knowing if the pain will leave if you do.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    And I listened as I read this the second time, MA. Incredibly moving. Music brings so many feelings you thought you could repress bubbling hotly to the surface.

    Take care and all the best as ever. Perhaps you will wake up to a better dawn tomorrow.

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Shruti

    So heartbreaking. Becoming so hollow that you feel like a living zombie, still breathing, still aware but no hunger, thirst and interest in anything that felt good before, and wishing for no other person to go through it. So many emotions, it is simply powerful.
    Congratulations on the win!

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Keira Pickard

    This portrays absolute depression, sadness and emptiness at the same time perfectly, and the sinking feeling of wondering if you'll ever feel happier than you currently are. The utter exhaustion of life in this is powerful, and it's wonderfully written. Emotional and brilliant!