So heartbreaking. Becoming so hollow that you feel like a living zombie, still breathing, still aware but no hunger, thirst and interest in anything that felt good before, and wishing for no other person to go through it. So many emotions, it is simply powerful.
Congratulations on the win!
This portrays absolute depression, sadness and emptiness at the same time perfectly, and the sinking feeling of wondering if you'll ever feel happier than you currently are. The utter exhaustion of life in this is powerful, and it's wonderfully written. Emotional and brilliant!