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by Mr. Darcy
I like punchy verse like this - each one a nugget, like a slow blink, each one revealing a new chapter.
by Ben Pickard
Yes, these are punchy lines which helps with the 'knockout' effect each one carries in content. A hard-hitting piece.
by Lainie Reay
I like the hard hitting lines, shows the true sadness.
Ohhh Kat, so lonely. You are not alone in your grief for a future you do not have.