Comments : Tattered Dreams

  • 2 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like punchy verse like this - each one a nugget, like a slow blink, each one revealing a new chapter.

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes, these are punchy lines which helps with the 'knockout' effect each one carries in content. A hard-hitting piece.

  • 2 months ago

    by Lainie Reay

    I like the hard hitting lines, shows the true sadness.

  • 2 months ago

    by Skyfire

    Ohhh Kat, so lonely. You are not alone in your grief for a future you do not have.