Comments : Jennifer, Such Rapture, You Enchant With... (Bowlesian Sonnet)

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Robert, this is a lovely tribute to your lady.

    I have never written one of these sonnets. The Shakespearean sonnets that I have are written using iambic pentameter. Does the bowlesian sonnet require this, as I can see this is missing in yours. Regardless of this, this sonnet could not help anyone understand your complete and utter devotion for this lucky lady.

    thank you for sharing.

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I wrote one of these and to answer Michael's question, iambic pentameter is usually a requirement and the rhyme scheme is typically ABBA CDDC EFFE GG so just that first stanza that needs looking at. But as mentioned, lovely either way and never easy to accomplish.

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Lovely tribute indeed. Thanks for introducing this form to us poets in this site.

  • 3 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.