Comments : Caught....

  • 4 months ago

    by William Mae

    Beautifully penned poem of cloaked emotion. The heart can hide from the world all its thoughts and all its passion. Hiding it from all but the owner of the heart. It can ache behind your smile or sing behind your frown and no person is wiser to it’s truth. You captured the deep feelings in this write Meena. Good job

  • 4 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Meena,

    I'm late to this particular party. Sorry!
    Your poem is relatable. It reminds me of a love that burns bright, but with time and distance the hope fades, leaving the love 'caught' in the web of memories.
    I realise that it's not written with meter in mind, but as I read, I felt the desire to regulate the words and rhyme. Also, is the word 'plaque' a typo for plague?

    Take care.

  • 4 months ago

    by yogi73

    The heartbreak of unraveling oneself from what was once a loving relationship...leaving only 'shadows of your memories'
    Loss and sadness speak to me from this poem. A thoughtful write.