This is excellent and so relating to me at the moment because I am so near to being made homeless at present so it definitely hits home for me lol) but a house is just bricks and water, a home is what you make it.glad to see this nominated x
Hi Em, this relates more to a metaphorical homelessness rather than literally but I'm so sorry to hear that you're at risk of losing your home, that must be hugely stressful for you. I hope you're able to get the help you need to avoid that, and soon! Xx
A poem like this is so personal that no one could accurately decipher it. . To me it conveys a heart that is homeless, adrift once more, not sure of where it will wash up. On the ocean is a place where wounds can be tended and plans made for a destination. In a world of shipwrecks, there is bound to be another that will make your 'hollow core' full again.