Comments : craving life (nove otto/acrostic)

  • 7 months ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Very clever and well rhymed. It's a new form of poetry for me: I'd heard of them, but didn't really know what it was! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great title as well :)

    • 7 months ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      It's a new form on me too! I found it challenging, but I did layer the difficulty! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Star

    I like that it’s a combination of two forms which works beautifully together. Also the ending line is smartly powerful! Being a statement of its own, that could be used alone like a quote or something, is actually the c rhyme.
    So very well written!

  • 7 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    An interesting form Mr D and you've captured the tension excellently! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 7 months ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Kitty. It was certainly challenging! X

  • 7 months ago

    by Everlasting

    Nice form! I may give it a try.

    • 7 months ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      You are a very funny lady!!