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by Keira Pickard
Very clever and well rhymed. It's a new form of poetry for me: I'd heard of them, but didn't really know what it was! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great title as well :)
by Mr. Darcy
It's a new form on me too! I found it challenging, but I did layer the difficulty! :)
I like that it’s a combination of two forms which works beautifully together. Also the ending line is smartly powerful! Being a statement of its own, that could be used alone like a quote or something, is actually the c rhyme.
So very well written!
by Kitty Cat Lady
An interesting form Mr D and you've captured the tension excellently! :-) x
Thanks, Kitty. It was certainly challenging! X
Nice form! I may give it a try.
You are a very funny lady!!