Comments : Song of Winter

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely piece of free verse from you, Kitty. Some darn good imagery sprinkled liberally throughout.

  • 1 week ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    So soothing to read, like inhaling and exhaling with the spirit of the wind. My favorite lines were "You speak through shapes in my hair / Your seasonal language billowing my coat behind me". I wasn't a big fan of the wording of "swirling sleety whirls" though, as it broke the flow a bit for me and read like a tongue twister, but perhaps that's what you were going for with the "s" and "w".

    Nature has such a powerful voice, if only we listen! Great write :)

    • 1 week ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much for your comments MA. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I don't think I write about nature enough! :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 days ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    "seasonal language billowing my coat behind me"
    ^
    Super imagery :)