Comments : Anemic.

  • 1 month ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    superb, though if i were nit-picking, the handCRAFTed does sing/rhyme with the last word in that stanza and that upsets the flow from this, otherwise thought provoking piece.

    As always nice work that i am fortunate enough to read for free!

    • 1 month ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      I appreciate it and see it now so thanks! Will take another look at it.

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    My goodness.... I'm say weeping at this, that ending just wow!!! I'm sorry I can't say much else but this got me right in the feels

    Take care xx

  • 1 month ago

    by Skyfire

    So unique. And I love the title!