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by Scott Cole
Thank you Scott
Reevaluating the value whatever we're trying to throw away, whether we decide to give them away or even recycle them may make a change.
Congratulations on the win!
Thanks Star! And yes, reusing or recycling seems to be the way to go with our diminishing resources.
Congrats on the win. I like this poem for the lesson that it conveys. However, it could benefit with some editing to make it flow better:
There are many things, that I own
Which accumulates over the year
During spring clean, some are thrown
And made to disappear
^ This is just a suggestion for the first stanza:I would write it like this
There are many things I own
accumulated over the year
during Spring cleaning as it’s known
some are rid off and disappear
Thank you Everlasting for your comment and alternative first stanza suggestion :) It does make it flow better.
by Mr. Darcy
So nice to see you on the front page! Well done.
Thank so much Mr. Darcy...very happy to be here :)
by Keira Pickard
How did I miss this one?! This is excellent, with Another great message. I love the title and how it flows, and also the perfect, neat ending. Congratulations on your win!
Thank you Keira for your wonderful comment. I'm truly grinning from ear to ear!