Comments : Moss and Ivy

  • 4 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    This is beautifully delicate. I love the subtle rhymes and nature themes, and the lovely content.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautiful poem, Maple. I only wish I had a nomination left!

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Beautiful

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    My word!! Xx

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Andrea,

    this poem looks a little like an angel. Is it?

    • 4 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Michael, you are awesome... I tried to make it look like an angel... whoooot

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I press my nose to a
    window sill, kissing nature
    during a frosty chill, yearning
    to run barefoot digging toes
    within a murky soot.
    ^
    Andrea, try this format, this may help?

    • 4 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Its an Angel!! Thats what I wanted!!
      Thank you my sweet!

  • 4 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Ohh, I can see it's an angel now, hehe

  • 4 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

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  • 1 year ago

    by Ah Satan 666

    You've been making art with your words Andrea ????... Love it!

    This poem has a sad, I'm missing you tone to it but it also feels romantic.
    X

  • 1 year ago

    by Ink

    Just amazing.