Comments : Come With Me: Atop The Hill

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I haven't seen a poem like this before. Is it your own unique format, or is it a specific poem that I haven't heard of? Likely the latter option, lol.
    So I gather the rhyme scheme goes:
    ABB, ACC, DEE, DG,HH,G,II,JKKJ. . . I think :) I might have entirely muddled the rhyme up -a very real possibility!
    I like the context, it's relaxing, actually! I love the last stanza the most and also the third.
    There's a lovely calming feel to this and I really enjoyed it.

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      You are good!

      The form is call Amphion. The rhyme scheme is abbaccdeed.

      I wrote two of those. But I separated the lines to help with the flow.