Comments : And Thus, I Write At Night

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    nicely done everlasting, and i like the style you have written your piece in :)

    M

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Is the rhyme scheme correct in the last verse?
    In any case, the form is neat.

    • 4 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I think so, the first and last verses are meant to be
      A Venus and Adonis stanza which is composed of six iambic pentameter lines with a rhyme scheme of ababcc. The middle stanza is a form called Amphion.

      I also just noticed that I made a typo in the last verse, tough was meant to be though so it would rhyme with know. Lol

  • 4 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I nearly missed this :)
    This is absolutely beautiful! The rhyming is so smooth and and the format is nicely displayed. It's a really interesting form. I loved reading it. Congratulations on your win!

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    Congrats Luce ^_^

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I loved the form. Congratulations!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Jack

    I liked how neat and formal this is!