Comments : cinereal collarbones (napowrimo day 12)

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is bloody fantastic writing, MA. I genuinely hope to see this on the front page next week.

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    As grim as this is, sometimes we need a taste of the truth that is here. Nice work.

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I'm really glad this won! Congratulations:)

  • 3 years ago

    by Subha Gain

    Heart touching poem! ????

  • 3 years ago

    by Oceanloveisland

    I see two stories unfolding here that merge into one. I really enjoyed reading this.