Comments : Perpetuity

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael

    Brilliant Cassie :)
    short, but so is time!

    M

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Time crawls
    Like a child
    Gathering
    Locomotive speed:
    villages, towns
    And cities morph
    Into a darkening
    Horizon
    Until finally
    Time runs. . . (Out)
    ^
    I hope you don't mind, I liked your poem so much that I thought I'd have a go.

    • 3 years ago

      by cassie hughes

      I don't mind at all Mr Darcy. This is brilliant!