Comments : When the Hats Became a Home (NaPoWriMo day 14)

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    First of all, wow. I love the creativity! This got me smiling specially because of the alliteration and the rhymes here and there. Just one tiny thing:

    They’re friends for now,
    and no knows when will
    this end and how.

    Did you mean “no one knows?”

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      I actually wanted to attempt a Rondeau with this idea, but got busy and I hat to post something :)
      You’re right I meant no one know.
      Thank you ^_^

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Ah! Well, I hope to eventually see that rondeau once you have time

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Probably after NaPoWriMo, a poem a day that's a challenge for me :)