Comments : Passion's fight (shape)

  • 2 years ago

    by cryptogod

    nice poem

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh wow, liked the shape of tge sword(if I'm not mistaken) moreover, liked your choice of words. Excellent!

    • 2 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Meena. I feel like I might need to work on the shape of my chess piece (King) lol
      Seriously, thank you :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Hellon

    Two questions...how do you get the shape? How do you still manage to keep the rhythm within the shape?

    Excellent write BTW :)

    • 2 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks for asking. I would love to say it was easy, but it can take a lot of thought, trial and error. A good tool is writing on a centred Word document. As for the shape, this site restricts what shapes can be posted, but symmetrical shapes often work well, as long as they have no intricate appendages! lol As for the the rhythm, i have tried to use meter throughout. There are times i have to alter my ideal word choice for a one that fits the shape - all in all, it takes patience, but that is the same for most forms.