Comments : Plane Of Death (Long)

  • 6 months ago

    by Everlasting

    So sad. Nice narrative. Even though the poem was long, I wanted to read it till the end. Well done.

    • 6 months ago

      by Jack

      Thanks!

  • 6 months ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Such a sad story. Is there some truth in it? Although you end the poem with 'the end' it feels like Mikey's life will go on with his mother's love to guide him.

    • 6 months ago

      by Jack

      Thanks and none of this happened to me of a family member.