Comments : Plane Of Death (Long)

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    So sad. Nice narrative. Even though the poem was long, I wanted to read it till the end. Well done.

    • 3 years ago

      by Jack

      Thanks!

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Such a sad story. Is there some truth in it? Although you end the poem with 'the end' it feels like Mikey's life will go on with his mother's love to guide him.

    • 3 years ago

      by Jack

      Thanks and none of this happened to me of a family member.