Comments : Vibrations (senryu?!)

  • 2 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Deafness went as
    your soul sang to mine, good, good
    good, good vibrations

    • 2 years ago

      by Katrynn

      Yours is better than mine haha

  • 2 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    First of all, I love the '?' at the end of the title, haha. To answer that, you've got this perfectly and it definitely is a senryu - you even had me for a moment on the second line! I literally was sitting alone in a room and said really loudly, "wait . . . Is this wrong??." Then I checked it a couple more times, lol
    Really good :)