Comments : Dad's Watch

  • 3 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is so wholesome, especially that last line. Love how much character and heart you've penned because of these prompts. The rhymes were lovely too (only thing I noticed was that chariot and Marriott don't exactly rhyme? Unless I'm pronouncing it wrong, but I assume that doesn't matter as much here because I read it as more easygoing rhymes, not strictly adhering to something). There's nostalgia and heartwarming memories here that you've opened up. Really enjoyed this one, Larry!