The writer described feelings by creating scenes in the external world and in their internal universe, using both to paint a picture of regrets and mistakes. I felt their pace and word choices brought the piece to life beautifully.

Hi POTP,

I have to say that this poem is exquisitely written! The voice with which you write feels so inate with your word choice and the tempo created with the actual structure and punctuation of the poem has staggeringly potent effects on us, the reader, but the relatability (if that's a word) or connection I felt reading it was for want of a better expression overwhelming. I saved to my favourites for later consumption :) A truely wonderful write.