Comments : You were yellow

  • 6 months ago

    by prasanna


  • 6 months ago

    by yogi73

    I didn't find the first few lines so remarkable but then you delved into some emotionally revealing lines and continued to build this clear and touching love story. The end seems to have a tone of sadness...maybe just me projecting?

    Great stanza!
    I was the bold dark purple who was hurting way too much to find my place in life and you-
    You were yellow.

    Well done and congrats