Comments : My Life in Boxes

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A house is more then memories, it has treasures which can't be replaced. Sounds like you're moving out from your childhood house..a sentimental write..

    Just one thing, verse 3, "twenty happy years shinking before my eyes" there's a typo- sinking.

    • 2 years ago

      by Hellon

      Thanks for the comment Meena and for spotting the should have been shrinking. Fixed now, thanks again.