Comments : "You're Right"

  • 10 months ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I do love well crafted sarcasm. This is quite the sardonic piece you have here, and I can clearly see your frustrations with your current situation bubbling over some with this bit of writing. I hope it brought you some relief to get some of these frustrations out with ink and pen. A few of the lines like “You never did anything wrong, You were there for me all along” hit very close to home with me. Good job maintaining and keep the sarcastic tone consistent throughout the whole piece. This definitely has a bit of a different feel to it than your other pieces that I have read.