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okay sorry just commenting one more time cause this poem hit me like a truck, im obsessed with how effortlessly everything flows into one another.

This is indeed outstanding. Reading & commenting after a very long time & I am glad to have come across such unique post. So elegantly expressed. Congratulations on very well deserved win.

Very good. That's a very simple yet daring way to express faith.
"I once knew how finding god inside my mouth felt;
it was like swallowing holy water that left light traces on my teeth.
I loved my god but I wish they believed in me"

That is pretty mind catching.