Comments : Marridge

  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    i have to admit, i didnt like the poem a lot... i like the subject... its how i feel about my boyfriend... but you need to use more descriptive words and make it more elaborated. i think you have the potential to make this poem better... so why not go back and fix it! keep working on it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Vivian

    Cool poem. This is how you really feel and you put it into a poem. That is what makes a poem realy good. Check out mine when you have the time.

  • 18 years ago

    by Betty Boop

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very touching to my heart... Very BEAUTIFUL..... I am getin married in June 06.... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by this love

    I feel the same way about my bf

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    Just dropping in and leaving you a comment, baby. Meh. I was mad at my little borth just a few seconds ago then I read your poems and got happy. =] And now I miss you. But this poem is great! **5/5** baby. Hope you get online later. =]

    Love
    Christina.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    P.s. You spelt "marriage" wrong.
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Sweetttt....
    keep writting