Hiding the lonely to offer others the illusion of being okay. What happens if the lonely is revealed? Will others take notice? Will they accept they play a part in the loneliness? Will revealed vulnerability cause deeper connection?

I enjoyed this poem, the refrain shows the daily affect of feeling alone/ unnoticed. Often the small recognitions are enough that one is accepted, loved and wanted. Ultimately, we need to have enough of this for ourselves, don't we?

Thanks for sharing. I do love your poetry.

I really like this poem, I'm sure a lot of people can relate . . .I know I can, I've asked the same myself over the years, it really is beautifully written. Regards Ink