Comments : Shattered

  • 2 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I throw a Hail Mary to forget your face,
    But you're the world of darkness I can't erase

    -- Really love this line. Poem is beautifully-penned. Thanks for sharing.

    --- MKKK

  • 1 year ago

    by Nil

    Every single stanza and line of this poem is beautiful in its heartbroken morose. I could feel every line. Thank you for sharing this.

    • 1 year ago

      by Dino Dhamphyr

      Thank you, thank you very much for your kind words. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. :)