Comments : Dance of the Summer nite

  • 4 months ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    At first this gave me a sense of sincerity until the poem wnet suddenly sad. But I get that, things can bring us so much peace and warm but we are still empty inside for some reasons.

    'I can love you now if giving the chance'
    --- 'giving' shouqd be 'given', I guess?

    --- MKKK