Love suicide
by Abby Jul 17, 2004
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As i cut my soft, smooth, skin....i see my bf standing above me...i dont know wat to do now...its to late for me to stop...next thing i know, is me in his arms cradling me in them and asking me..."y did you do it? didnt my love matter to you? wasnt my love enough so you wouldnt do this to your self?" now its to late...im gone and theres nothing anybody can do about it....but the last thing i hear and see...is him pick up the razor and end his life...b/c he thought....now since my love of my live is gone....i should end my life to be with her...next thing he knew...he was dead on the floor laying next to his love.....so you can say it was a love suicide........but did they ever met again?........thats the question....... |
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17 years ago
by Chelsea
Omg...this is the best poem ever...its deffintally a 5/5..great job!!!
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19 years ago
wow that was stronger then "imagine my suicide" it reminds my of what i'd do i if my girlfriends died It was hella powerful i loved it.
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19 years ago
by Abby
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this is directed to Mario. i like it if u have nothing good to say dont say it at all. therefore dont criticize others work, then say you like it its contridicting what you say. midnight, i loved it. please write more. -
19 years ago
by christine
its a really nice poem...i like it...give ya a 5
