This is incredible. I grew up in Christian church and know all these stories. You make me nostalgic for it. The miracles and philosophies speak to so many different parts of my mind.

A prophet ran from Heaven’s face,
But found no shore, no secret place.
Yet mercy’s, whale rolled back the sea,
And Jonah rose,once lost, now free.

This in particular. I have felt called to return to my Christian roots. I think I will start with a Bible by myself, and meeting up with a friend. I miss the comfort that it brings. Maybe I am just like Jonah.

The tempo is great, the flow is wonderful. I could bob my head along to the syllables. You are truly a gifted poet. Easy to comprehend, to the point, with poetic skill.

Thank you for your feedback. Reading your poetry is a delight. I’m glad to have found your work.

I nominate you to win the front page. (If that is even still a thing…) There has been amazing poetry soothing my soul lately. You are a gift.

May you be blessed <3

Beautiful love it Awesome job