Comments : I Need You version II

  • 2 days ago

    by hailey

    I NEEEEEEDDDDUHHHH a sub masc like those flowers mamaaazzzzzz!
    I need one like the rain needs the ground to catch it when it falls.
    I need one like the pillow you lay on to fall into a sweet sleep every night.
    I need one like the earth who needs the sun to stay alive in the galaxy.
    I need one like the pencil who needs the paper to harbor its led
    anyways kewl mamaz I need one so hmu if u wanna talk
    I'm never dry btw! <3

    • 2 days ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Oh my goodness, you just turned my poem into a whole new masterpiece with your own flavor.. I love how you played with the metaphors and gave them your own twist. Keep that poetic energy flowing, mamazzz! And that last line? Hahahaha, you definitely know how to leave a poet smiling! Thank you for bringing your fun, creative vibes to my poem!

  • 2 days ago

    by hailey

    love the poem mamazzz!!