WOW! this is fantastic! Such a simple meter with a deep message behind it! I agree...definitely words to live by!

That should be an anthem! Definatly words to live by! So powerfully said! Loved it!

So little words with so big message. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

WOW! That's all I can say. Great poem.

awesome poem. great message, and i love the short lines, great job

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-August, crude commenter and poetry conessuier

This was REALLy beautiful. and it had this sort of quality that isn't seen around here that much, of shorter words with more meaning, instead of agonized ramblings and such...so I say this is an excellent poem!

//Truest Lies//

Ahaha so true Truest Lies! I second what he/she said. 5 stars.