Comments : How Can You Not?

  • 19 years ago

    by Casey

    That was awesome! It almost made me cry because it comes so close to explaining my situation.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Great work Dainelle! Keep it up
    Love Amy xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Skittle

    I was blown away. Such emotion, such words, this is truly a poem for the saddened. Thank you. It was incredible.

  • 19 years ago

    by Chloe

    Wow, Danielle, that was one great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by josephine

    I tihnk that poem is beautifull, ur choice of words is really really good!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily Strickland

    Oh My Gosh! Amazing Poem! I Absolutly Loved It! You Are Such A Great Writer And I Enjoy Reading Your Poems! Magnificiantly Written And Great Job! Keep It Up.

  • 19 years ago

    by SarZz

    Hay....izz dashin!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..that was soo AMAZING!!!..i dont even know what else to say..im speecheless.

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    How can you not,
    they are so deafening
    Pleading to be heard
    yet hushed, they will remain.

    I absolutely love that stanza. I know how it feels to think you're screaming so loudly, and crying so hard ... and still not being heard. (I don't know if that was your message, but that's what I got.)