With....without???(triolet)

by Megha   Jul 22, 2004



the poem is in the form of a triolet which is AbaAabAB format... It has 8 lines... 1,4,7 lines are same. 2 and 8 are same. 2 and 6 should rhyme. 3 and 5 should rhyme...my first time at a triolet..hope u guys like it....:-)

Don't love someone you can live with,
love someone you cant live without,
you need to be clear in your mind,
don't love someone you can live with,
someone you cant live without you must find,
then there wont be any doubt,
don't love someone you can live with,
love someone you cant live without!!

i cant live with him....but how will i live without him???...aaaahhhh...its so crazy!!:-(

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  • 21 years ago

    by Megha

    thanks trincy...its all thanks to u really..i dint even know that so many types of poems exist till i read your work :-)

  • 21 years ago

    by Ş∂ņďħy∂

    Good try.
    "Don't love someone you can live with,
    love someone you cant live without"
    You used the quote very well and made a very sensible poem. Nice poem.

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