thanks alot for the comments!!

yea ive been better its been really hard. but its ok thanks for the comment

thanks that made me HAPPY! lol thanks alot!

OMG that was such a good poem! 5.0 cud u check out sum of my poems

well thanks alot i mean it and it was so fast that u returned the comments!

dang you remember alot of things you must have good memory good poem
5/5``-``

thanks

Aww it's so cute. ^_^

The flow was stable, and the rhymes were original. No fixes here.

The thing is...that this guy was so lucky to have you. =) He really was. If you loved him this much, then he's something you want to have around all the time. Even if you're not dating him. =P Very nice poem. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow this is such a good poem for such a simple form and R.S. 5/5

[PygmyPuff]

It was really good but I think that you shouldn't have used 'I remeber when' at the beginning of each stanza. It was to repetitize.
Your last stanza added an excellent impact. The part about you just being a memory, LOVED it! 5/5

Yes! i agree with you, i love this poem, it is definatly one of your best!
The rhyming is great, with a nice use of vocab.

The flow was good also, i especialy liked the last stanza, it was really well written!

5/5 from me

~Murder.

Very amazing, i loved it, i think that whatever it was had to be awesome as well, because now its awaaaazing. lol. but there were a few spelling mistakes- reminiscing and truth. other than that, a great poem, so sad and emotional, and true for many, it flowed very well and was expressed clearly.

x.x:Lauren

Also, i /like/ the repetitive ness of the i remember .. i think it adds to the poem. *dont listen to that other person* lol.

Beautiful penned! simply within every stanza yet flowed with beautiful emotions! marvellous!

5/5 you have great talent, the poem flowed really well and the story was clear....your poem will now be in my memory.... :P keep up the good work!

That is so sad and i understand that completely! alot of people will know exactly where your coming from with this, good work hun 5/5 from me

xoxo Lucy

I enjoyed this, it was really sweet yet sad, and filled with emotion.
I liked the rhyme scene and flow and I enjoyed the imagery and wording. 5/5

Good flow and rhythm... loved this one just like all the other ones ive read of urs... keep it up, ur very talented