thanks so much for your comments... and thanks Zy... i kno about the stanzas and stuff im not to good at all that yet... im working on it... originally this was going to be a song though so im not sure how to set it up!!

thanks again for the comments!! i hope everyone enjoys my poems as much as i like writing them!!

Girl i can relate to every word in this poem all i get is lied to and hurt when someone likes me and wants to get to know me and stuff..
great poem though it was touching like every poem you write
take care and i'm always here for ya girl
love ya forever
-bobby-