Girl, Tjis is so deep, sad but beautiful. You are very talented and shouldn't be cutting. I bet your a beautiful person. Continue writting, i love this piece! *****

That was sooooooooooo good...It made me cry...I feel this way too...I hope that he comes back into your life...and that everything turns out ok...read a few of my poems and tell me what you think if you want

omg -- that is the sweetest -- and yet scariest poem ever -- hun i know what yer going through -- b/c i am going through the same thing right now -- he was my everything :[[ but now he is nothing to me -- just b/c we have grown apart -- by miles -- and by heart :[ i just wish i could be back with him -- and i have thought about that good old friend -- knife -- a whole bunch too -- but a part of me says what to do!?? so i don't know -- i hope yer okay -- but plz. don't kill yer self -- go through this with me -- msg me on aol lala land 45290 or yahoo kiss_me_42590 thanks :]] -- alison -- i <3 yooooow :]]

its very nice and touching and i felt ur pain through the lines and i agree with everything u said abt love in this poem! its nice how u were able to write down all ur feelings becoz they ended to be a very excellent poem ! way to go

great poem!!!! sry bout what u r going through but good luck
~cort~

Your poem brought so many tears to my eyes, and it is so wonderful at the same time.

dude i can so relate to that poem THATS WHY I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!! keep up the good work okaye and if you needa gal to talk to ill be here girlie!!!

Totally brilliant. I hope I can write like this one day. best wishes abz xxxxxxx

this was BEAUT-I-FUL!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT REALLY LOVE IT! I guess its because i felt that way in my life before

awsome poem i promis things will get better for you sometime or another i know because ive been thru it 5/5 keep up the good work!

omg. i have been throug this. i was 14 and in love. i totally know how all these emotions feel. you did such a great job at expressing all these emotions. i love it. and remeber its not crazy to love becuz if you love someone then you love someone and it shouldnt matter how old you are!

wow. u r 13 yrs old & already experienced so much--wow. and ur poems get so much love. look at this 248 comments & 835 votes...omg. wow, u r goin to become something so special/famous one day. u r so talented. it is a lot too, i know how u feel. my everything was my best friend veena & she kinda left my world too. her bf wont let her talk to me & all . but just hold ur head high. God bless u.

You will find someone else maybe now or later just hold on to the good memory's . You might feel that no one could replace him that's true because you loved him . Just try to be strong . That's all i could say.

Hey! I feel the same way! Great job! Lol you really put some good emotion into it!

this poem was so wonderful! i can relate...the beginning is what caught my eye. u asked questions...and i could answer yes to all of them. i am very sorry for your loss. i hope you will find someone someday!
xo-Brittany-ox

Awww that was a good poem gurl I know how You feel I use to feel the same way.Don't worry i know it may seem like you'll never get over him but time will come and heal the damage that he's done.Good job well writtin.

this poem was brilliant. wow. perfect.

Jessica, I wrote this, it is 100% mine. Could you please give me the links to some of those websites?

Oh my god...............Im in shock...............that sounds like whats happening to me right now..............Im definitly adding you to my favorites.

Amber; for f(u)ck sake, then, give me your mum's and your sister's phone numbers. I sure WILL call them. You're a twisted person; and I have already reported this. Oh, and 'u typ lYk dis'; I NEVER do that. An 18 year old shouldn't do that; you little twit. Proof number one.