Tell Me

by Liam   Aug 1, 2004


Get this out of my system,
before I start to climb the walls again
Somebody please
tell me what to do
before I start
to lose my grip again.
If not now,
tell me when
and where
and how
cos I think that I'm losing my mind.
I'll get you,
of that you can be sure,
you know I wont give up without a fight
All I need
is someone to hold my hand
and tell me its gonna be alright
If not you,
then please.
Please tell me who
cos I think that I'm losing control of my mind
Now I think
that perhaps it was a dream,
because I know you felt the same as me.
So how the hell
can you look at me that way
and just turn your back on history?
If not now,
tell me when
and where
and how
cos I think that I'm losing my mind

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  • 21 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    wicked!

  • 21 years ago

    by Liam

    thanks, i'll keep that in mind, just got to wait for the edit function work again lol

  • 21 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Another great one!

    I might separate each line in half though...and make this 4 stanzas of four lines with an ending couplet

    or even make the last line do this:

    If not now...
    tell me when..
    and where...
    and how...
    cos I think that I'm losing my mind

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