How am i the first to comment O.o...

This poem was amazing.... Very descriptive and even with such short lines had a steadya nd constant flow.... very powerfull words chosen... and i loved the concept...

Great poem, I really liked it, it had alot of emotion in it. Really well worded. Keep writing
Love,

-Blue

Wow, I really loved your poem! I know how you feel!

wow that's an awesome poem....what are you talking about you're not good? You're crazy!

wow..robyn..this is truley amazing...i thought i would return the favor by reading one of your poems..and after reading this im definatly gonna read more..you are extrmely talented awesome work...<33
-Mort

Ahh i just love ur poems..ur so damn talented!

I really loved thsi poem. Very were descriptive and showed much emotion behind it. Awesome job!

Really different and cool......just keep it up!

I love this poem, I can totally relate. Keep it up!

Excellent JOb! Wow, I feel you on this one! Keep it uP!

Robyn this poem was sooo good...it is very detailed and explains a lot of things i go through everyday...your a great writer keep up the good work gurl...luv ya!!

This is powerful stuff buddy...reallly quite wonderfull honest.

I felt that maybe you could have been somewhat less blunt....you know like suggest things without actually saying them...infer what you mean to say rather than just say it...like if you wanted to show us that the sun was shining on the grass. You could write

The sun shone on the grass

which works..but is so basic..or you could say...

Light touches the eager ground

or some mince like that...you get my meaning?

Awesome poem...I'll be reading more of your stuff...thanks for the comments on my poems!

awesome description and nice creativity i found it very well written and i loved it .. keep it up !

wow, didn't really catch my attention until the last few lines, then it really peaked (can't spell) my interest. this is really good, and somewhat relates to my poem "the mask" which is really good. another job well done

-Church

I love poems that have short lines like this..they are most effective. this was excellent. very well expressed. another one of my favorites. xxx

That poem is so gorjuz. obviously alot of people loved it.
The thing i like the most about it,is that i can relate to it.
I've been hiding behind a mask for the last 4 years.
Keep up with the good work.
10/10