Wow, I really liked this one. There's nothing you could do better with it, it is really perfect. I know a lot of people can probably relate to that, because I know I can! You might not have written in a while but this is as good if not better than ever. So good job, and please keep writing!!!

excellent! i love the layout and structure of the poem, well done!

I certainly agree with Julie....very nice poem...!!!!u wrote sumtin abt it on the forum...well thats where i gotta know abt it...excellent job!

That was such a true poem I feel everything that is going on. . . I swear that it's freaky Thanks for reading my poem and i guess ur right

Love, Taylor

ok WOW.that poem really moved me!!! WOW..very great!!! totally can relate!! awesome!! 5!!

I think every1 feels like that sometimes. But it's the choice to change, to dare to hope that makes a difference in your life love your poems that i have read so far and am adding you to my favourites