hello
i think ur poem is veryy good but it needs a little work but all and all it is a good poem congrats

wow, you're right, that's brilliant writing! you're amazing doll, keep writing <333
-Mortalidaga
xxxx take care

i could feel the pain in this one...

wow really good poem, I like it a lot..
its deffinatley a 5
Keep it up^_^

Shannon

Awesome poem, you did a great job writing it!
*two thumbs up*
-Leanne-
p.s. If you could check out some of my stuff, I'd really appreciate it! Thanks!

good job