Comments : Another to my Mom

  • Thats a great poem. Even i used have arguments with my mom. BUt i miss her a lot, now a days... I even miss the worst fights! Great poem dear...I really loved it. But i don't know what title may suit it. I am also planning to write a poem for my mom.. Hey you write what i plan, before me! (Do you have a mindometer? A machine which reads mind??? I doubt!!!!!) See you, Trincy.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    I already have a poem called broken mirror and I don't see how that would go with it...hmm.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    wow...that was great work!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    wow...thats really good...you should call it "that last chance is dead" or "its too late" using the last line of your poem is good for a title! i usually do it like that...anyway...you've got great talent sierra and you should definatly keep writing!