HAHAHAHA GREAT

lol dats gd

:) that was hilarious. reminds me of something, when I was eighteen, just about to go for it and a policeman knocked on the window...oops

Jane's sister Lolly

That's hot. Excellent write. I loved it. <3333

lol great poem 5/5

*LMAO! the ending was sooo awsome! your VERY talented! omg i loved it!
=)) ..}{illary!*

Wow. I'm glad it isn't true. It was so great. I liked the twist at the end. Throughout the poem, I wasn't expecting that... and then BAAM! Lol. Good job! I enjoyed reading it!
~BJ~

Nasty...........but hilarious!

Haha. The beginning was great. But the end was even better. It was hilarious. I'm still laughing. :]] 5/5

Way cool poet...OMG TMI...How cool, funny exciting...I could see it all. A very pictoral write...lol Thats tooo much...LMAO