Very Good. Keep it up.

Nah Im adding you to my faves your a truly talented poet and you never do cease to amaze me! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent!

i wish my bf told or wrote me these things

your in my favorites you pussy lover

Very nice piece. I like the opening question style. Quite Shakespearean. You're going to my favorite list!

Robert,

I love how you’ve taken the timeless inspiration of Shakespeare and made it your own....
The vivid imagery and heartfelt admiration really shine through, especially in lines like ‘But, Never, Shall You Fall, Fade, In My Eyes.’ It’s clear how much care and passion went into crafting each comparison Beautifully done!"

Gel